IoClock's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Portal Crisis I]

I love you Revolutionary Clock

Movie resembles uber HAX

Kepp submitting yo!

First review?

RiotGearClock responds:

First review indeed. Thanks comrade.

[SBC's Wonderful Clockmas!]

Yay Rupee

You managed to capture the NGCity n00b so well, it's almost like you make animations just to piss them off for movie fodder.

And just because I have to:

LEEEROOOOOOOOOY NJEEEEEEENKINS!!!

fifen

RupeeClock responds:

Well actually, I don't need to piss them off, they piss themselves off practically.

[† DurianClock]

So THAT'S what went down

Could have used more explosions, no?

StrangeClock responds:

A MAN DIED HAVE YOU NO SHAME

[RC: Clockmas]

Go Red Go!

Probably your best work yet! The animation was smooth and the whole thing was very well done. I especially liked the end where The Red was having his ass kicked by the 2 pieces of Bit. Golden!

Just one thing I noticed. When Neb wrote the original poem, we were in 8th grade, and Channukah was like the first week of December, so the line about the Jews' holiday being weeks ago was accurate. This yeah Channukah actually started on Christmas (WTF?) so their holiday was actually AFTER ours, lol.

Nevertheless, fifen!

RiotGearClock responds:

Yeah, but I couldn't really change the entire thing about channukah, now could I. lol

Any way, glad you enjoyed. Happy Clockmas!

[GrandfatherClock's Bday]

Wow

OK, I don't know whether to attribute this to the fact that I haven't slept more than three hours all week, but that was hilarious. ^_^

RupeeClock responds:

Wait, how many hours?

Goto sleep man, that can't be good for you. :P

Oh, and thanks!

[C-19 Part1]

lol

Very well done Red. I'm truly impressed.

Happy Clock Day

~Jonnadiah

RiotGearClock responds:

Thanks comrade, glad you liked it. Happy Clock Day.

[Problem with the tank]

Well, you beat me

Congratulations on getting your first saved sumbission onto Newgrounds before me. It wasn't all that bad, though it seemed to be based on a conversation we had in AP Euro this year. Then again, all my best ideas come to be during school as well. (Someone DID accuse MF of shooting archduke Ferdinand, right?)

The beginning was rather boring. The opening into text was far too long, especially for people who can read fast. Perhaps you can put on a fake British accent and introduce the video before reverting to the old 1920s style video. There was little motion on screen, which did kind of piss me off. If you are going to do a movie with little talking, then the motions must compensate. The clouds were actually moving at a good rate, but you should speed up and exaggerate the motions of the tank operator to catch the humorous fastness of early film.

RiotGearClock responds:

I don't think we accused MF of shooting franz ferdinand, it was more like, "Shut up musty, your franz ferdinand" or something like that. Anyway, thanks for the in depth review. Thanks for warching.

[The John And Kris Show]

Not Bad

I must say the Flash ability at DHC has improved 5-fold since I first saw some of your stuff almost a year ago. This movie was OK. The beginning was pretty funny, but after a while it did get tedious. It was pretty obvious you were trying to be funny in the end.

Graphics were OK. I see you used a seperate movie clip symbol for mouth movements. The Super Flash Bros. have an awesome tutorial on their site that details how to do lip syncing effectively. I'd check it out.

Style. It was a lot like a school lecture, which I guess is what you were trying to obtain. I don't like school, and I don't lectures. There are several other school project Flashes that aren't lectures, try that style next time.

Sound was clear, the mic did make that annoying static sound occasionally when air hit it (usually when John spoke), try covering it with a thin cloth to prevent this.

Not much in the way of violence, why is that even a review criteria?

Humor. Again, it seemed a little strained at the end. In the beginning it seemed smoothe, but most of your jokes were sophmoric. (At least that's what my underwear says)

Overall, I'll give you guys a 6/10. Keep improving, I look forward to more.

IceKeyHunter responds:

Heh. John came up with the underwear joke. It's the only joke he wrote himself.

[Bday Card]

Too bad

That everyone on Newgrounds is a sex and violence craving lunatic. If this doesn't get blammed, I think I'm going to send it to somebody ^^

Demolit responds:

I think so too. Use it, i don't mind ^^